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Submitted: May 19, 2012
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Laura Character Sheetby *LunarSparkle

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Full name: ''Laura'' Jane , just also goes by Laura ( JAP: Roora ローラ )

Last name: Winther

Nickname: Lau, Jane, Little Laura.

Age: 14

Species: Echidna (Short Beaked)

Gender: Female

Power: Controlling darkness/shadows

Role in the organization: Co-leader.

Personality: A girl that has a really sensitive side when i comes to feelings. She also haves a hard time with controlling her emotions. Because of the dark energy inside of her, she can get a dark glow and a little darker fur color and lose control.Then she will try to destroy everything around her, and enjoys it. Zack has the power to activate this energy and make her go crazy. Though she can also lose control in difficult/emotional situations.When she calms down and is turned back to normal, she cannot remember what she has done during the time she lost control. And does often feel guilty because she might have hurt people and destroyed things.

DOB: 14 July 1998

POB: Mobius

Sexual orientation: Straight

Type: Flight

Fur colour: Light Brown

Eye colour: Red

Family: Draze (Twin brother), Parents unknown.

Hobbies: Singing, Playing piano and drawing.

Biggest wish: To be normal, just like everyone else.

Likes: Her friends and Draze.

Dislikes: Difficult situations,mean people,stubborn people,rivals and enemies.

Weakness: Pressure and her feelings.

Fears: Losing the ones she loves,death and losing control and/or going insane.

Attacks/abilities: Laura can use her powers to float/fly for a short time, and can use it to create dark orbs/beams to attack people with.

Laura and Draze were kidnapped by Zack's organization when they were really young. They got put dark energy in them so they would grow up as evil people, and join organization ''Malefic''.This is a group of mobians who try to take over the world by using dark powers and other elemental powers. After alot of training, they became the Co-leaders of Zack's organization. Because of this Laura is a outcast and wishes to be normal, just like everyone else.

Theme Song:

Numb-Linkin Park
Bring me to life- Evanescence

©Art and character by me

Alternate/Casual outfit:

Draze's Sheet:

Zack's Sheet:

Critique by ~KK-Afterbrun Nov 8, 2012, 4:35:51 PM

I'll start with the redundent factor... An Echidna..Power of darkness...The originality is lacking big time for me... That being said, however, Laura Jane is very well represented. Dispite the Bio not being finished, it is far better then most 'evil' echidnas that most people made. The added Classic form is a great twist to the more modern of others. I do look forward to seeing how the bio developes as that will help her improve. If the bio was complete, I would have most likely given a higher originality score then at this point. But still, you did a nice job of creating her.

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Critique by ~Silver1996 May 19, 2012, 1:49:12 PM

It's a bit late, but I wanted to write a critique c:

I really like this! I like the poses she used, it's really fitting^^ I also like the background, it fits her colors^^ I like the effects in extra and I like the forms. Dusk is really detailed, and super sure does look super~ I like the story behind her, and the character looks fantastic^^ the kodonsha is really apart, I like that. the colors she choosed looks really cool, I also like her design alot. this looks very cool and all, so in one word: awesome job on this^^